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China doll in black velvet dress,
her curls tell the story of a bloody mess.
Stare blankly at their playful eyes;
porcelain skin - her darkness in disguise.

Her green eyes eternally glow,
Still child - no heart to become a window
for mortality to steal you
from your toyland, my little Mary Sue.

How long have you witnessed her pain?
Senseless tears she shed for a candy cane.
What dreadful sight your empty look.
My frozen princess your head never shook.

They dub your silence, call your name.
Mary Sue you can never say the same.
Ten long years and still on the shelf,
you can never really tell time yourself.

No longer a ballerina,
she is now called Lady Constantina.
Still child - time to smell the cinder.
Gone are the days of candy and kinder.

Buried with the same youthful face
in a chest of memories and disgrace.
Tales of midnight evil no more.
Silly were they to think you walked the floor.
Mary Sue, you\'re just a doll of perfect doom.

-SF Matingka
©2003-2009 ~serpentinebeauty
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:iconarcs-en-ciel:
Wow. :0 That's awesome~

--
"'But I don't want to go about mad people,' Alice remarked.
'Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat, 'we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad.'
'How do you know I'm mad?' said Alice.
'You must be,' said the Cat, 'or you wouldn't have come here.'"
:iconquietwatcher:
Stupendously well written. It almost makes me feel sorry for Mary Sue characters, not quite. But Mary Sues are quite like dolls. Most authors eventually out grow them, leave them behind, try to forget them...most.

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"Those who are wrong but think themselves right, fall hardest when truth comes to light." Anon.

"Ignorance isn't bliss, it just makes you look stupid." Anon.
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People! You wouldn't believe when I last logged in. Same date I posted Mary Sue! All because I thought I lost my username and password. I think I have aged but still the same morbid clown. Thanks for adding Little Mary Sue to your favorites. Will try to post more. =)
:iconnosferatu4444:
this is one of the best poems I have ever laid my eyes on:O
it reads like a storry, but still its a poem, I have fallen in love with this one.

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